Contents draft one

Here is a first development of my contents page. I used a mid-long shot and made the model the most prominent image on the page. I would have the text around her signifying how the magazine is all about the music and the artists.

I decided that however much I liked the idea of having a prominent figure on the page I much prefer the way I have ordered this contents page.

This is a draft of my contents page, I do think the layout is adequate, however in my opinion I think that something isn't right with it. I will probably add a background and more writing onto the contents page and move pictures around.